Yesterday, I met Jon Masters. Well, cyber-met him. And he asked if he could add the Dominant point of view to the brief scene I’d written the day before. I was delighted at the idea, and even more delighted when I saw the finished work. See what you think.
The story now starts:
Jon had been hanging around the coffee area for a while… Read more…
Enjoy!

I love this writing exercise AND it was thrilling to read the story from both points of view. Thank you for sharing, Olivia π XOXO
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Hey, I’m so glad you liked it!! π
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Fun story π
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Thanks!! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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